So, little update, almost halfway done with my little Interactive Fiction project here. Really looking forward to some feedback so that I know what to do and what not to do as the story progresses...

And I just realized I haven't optimized it to display in the small window on here here. I at least improved it now. If you still have issues or get stuck, try to read it full screen and if that doesn't help, you can always use the link to read it.